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I am scared. I sit in this empty room, with a demon in my spine. He's always there, twisting my nose and poking at my face. His hateful words stab at my blackened heart. Its hurts in a way that the black blood will never heal. My blood is black.
This demon, in my spine, is always there. Then why do I feel so lonely? He always talks to me. He always makes himself known. Then why do I feel so solitary?
I hold my chest, hoping to feel a heart beat. Why can't I find it? Did She take it from me? Did She take that, like She took my sanity? Wait, no, it is there. I feel its faint fluttered, shriveled to nearly nothingness. That is worse than having no heart beat at all. My blood is a hollow black.
All my life I've been beaten. I have been broken. And I have been locked away. My sorrow filled words will forever be unspoken. And that scares me. What if no one hears my last breath? What if no one realizes that my life is lost, even before my death? Is it best that way? Best that no one knows of my plagued existence? Why is my blood so black?
Tormented, am I. I wish she would let me die! But death, I don't think I can handle. The earth is dark. The ground has nothing. I don't like the darkness…..My blood is dark and black.
My soul has been forsaken. With the snakes, and the whispered voices that control me, I have killed so many. I hold my head in my hands, trying not try cry. But I am glad that the sobs come, they drown out their hisses, and the tears blur the horrid memories. My blood is submerged in the color black.
The Woman of Snakes. She did this to me. Then why….why do I forgive Her so easily? I know I should hate Her. But I don't. Is it wrong….wrong to love Her? I have to…I can't help it. She is my Mother. My blood is Her black.
What am I supposed to do when my greatest fear, is the one I love the most? She has done so much to me. She has caused all of my grief, and all of my pain. I cannot forget what she has done, but I cannot forget where I came from.
((Is this in the right catagory??))
This is kind of a poem, yet I couldn't write this in poem format. I had to write it as a narrtive. Narratives are easier for me.
This is my version of Crona's poem, what I think it possibly could have been. I was drawing a sad Crona ((poor thing!)) and bits of this popped into my head.
This was hard for me to write, but it didn't take me long.
I typed like 5 copies until I came up with this one. I'm still not so sure that I like it much, but I don't know what else to do with it.........
I usually write depressing stuff((A phase I am growing out of)) but this was really hard. I really had to get inside Crona's head...but he's a fictional character! I had to think of his past, his heart his soul, where he came from, why he was here, and how muddled his feelings were.
I dunno. This still does not satisfy me...tell me what you think^^ I'd love to read your comments.

((Sorry for the long comment^^'))
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foxgirlesada Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
waaaah T-T i feel like crying poor guy or girl witch ever crona is , i'm still confused on that
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Scara161 Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think he's a boy. I dunno. Lol
Thanks for reading!
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foxgirlesada Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
i read somewhere in the anime crona is a boy anf manga crona a girl so yea and your welcome
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Scara161 Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, I dunno. Lol. The pink/purple hair doesn't help, haha.
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foxgirlesada Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
lol yea :3
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flamethorne Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i felt so helpless when i read this, like there's nothing i can do for him because he is hurt so badly. medusa is such a bitch.
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Scara161 Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I agree. I always hated her. Lol
thank you so much for reading!
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flamethorne Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah, no prob. it was really good.
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Taintersmaster666 Jan 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
This Doesn't Make Me Wish I Was Never Born, This Makes Me Want To Do Something To Help Chrona X'(
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Kiri-Hikari Aug 26, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
The poem is quite depressing, but not as destructively so as Crona's poem truly was. I mean, it even sent Black Star into a depression. This made me feel a bit sorry for Crona, more so than I already do, but it just didn't have that instant 'I wish I was never born' effect.
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